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    Something I thought I should share.

    Hailey
    Hailey


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    Join date : 2011-08-05
    Age : 25
    Location : USA

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    Post by Hailey Fri Sep 16, 2011 11:27 pm

    I found this and related so much. I figured I would share it.

    Hello sir, remember me?
    I'm the man you'd thought I'd never be,
    the boy who you reduced to tears,
    the lad called 'thingy' for 6 whole years.

    Yeah, thats right, my name's bob
    the one who landed the popstars job,
    the one who you told look don't touch,
    the kid who wouldn't amount to much.

    Well I'm here and you're still there
    with your fake sports car and your receding hair,
    dodgy farra trousers that you think are smart,
    married to the woman that teaches art,
    married to the life, married to the school,
    I wanna sing and dance sir, now who's the fool?

    Sing and dance? you thought I was barmy-
    Settle down 'thingy', join the army.
    And who were you to tell me this?
    The dream I want I'll have to miss.

    Sir is god...
    He's been given the right to structure lives overnight.

    Now I know life's true path,
    tanks and guns that'll be a laugh.
    Nah not me , I'm a mega civillian,
    I wont lead my life riding pillian.

    But thanks for the advice,
    I'm sure it'll do
    for the negative dickheads, just like you!
    As for now I've a different weapon-
    Stage and screen is about to beckon.
    And here I sit in first class...
    Bollocks sir, kiss my ass!
    Lizzie
    Lizzie


    Posts : 272
    Join date : 2011-08-05
    Age : 26
    Location : Nose deep in a book

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    Post by Lizzie Sat Sep 17, 2011 10:57 am

    Something I thought I should share.  Amen

    I LOVE IT!!! I can relate to it soooooo much. There's always someone in your life who thinks your worthless and that you won't amount to anything. Who cares?!
    Mac
    Mac
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    No. 1 Poster


    Posts : 607
    Join date : 2011-08-03
    Age : 26
    Location : North Korea

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    Post by Mac Sat Sep 17, 2011 12:12 pm

    Agreed! This is extremely relateable ('K can't spell that then). It reminds me of Jessie J's song 'Who's laughing now'. Look it up Smile
    Joce
    Joce
    Admin


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    Join date : 2011-08-03
    Age : 25

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    Post by Joce Sat Sep 17, 2011 12:30 pm

    Agreed.
    Bollocks sir, kiss my ass!
    Sorry, I felt like that needed to be said again.
    Bollocks sir, kiss my ass!
    Whahahahah Twisted Evil
    Lizzie
    Lizzie


    Posts : 272
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    Age : 26
    Location : Nose deep in a book

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    Post by Lizzie Sun Sep 18, 2011 5:57 pm

    Hailey
    Hailey


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    Post by Hailey Sun Sep 18, 2011 7:02 pm


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